失礼ながらこの章を書き改めてはどうでしょうの英語

• Might I take the liberty of suggesting that you re-write this chapter?

• 失礼     失礼 しつれい discourtesy impoliteness Excuse me Goodbye
• がら     がら 柄 pattern design
• この     この 此の this
• どう     どう 如何 how in what way how about 同 the same the said ibid. 僮 child servant
• うで     うで 腕 arm skill
• でし     でし 弟子 pupil disciple adherent follower apprentice young person teacher's
• しょ     しょ 諸 various many several
• う     う 佑 help 傴 bend over 鵜 cormorant 卯 fourth sign of Chinese zodiac (The Hare,
• 失礼な     【形】 1. derogatory 2. discourteous 3. disrespectful 4. flippant 5. ill-bred
• ながら     ながら 乍 though notwithstanding while during both all while doing although
• 改めて     改めて あらためて another time again over again anew formally
• はどう     はどう 波動 surge 覇道 military rule
• しょう     しょう 匠 workman artisan mechanic carpenter means idea 背負う to be burdened with to
• でしょう     でしょう (I) think (I) hope (I) guess don't you agree? I thought you'd say that!
• 多数決で決めてはどうでしょうか。    I recommend we take a vote.